March 2023
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I hope you find this collection of picture book first lines inspiring and motivational.
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Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*subverts the reader's expectations
*makes the reader laugh
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
*introduces the concept
*references something with universal appeal
*uses a play on words
*makes the reader feel something
Missing Violet
By Kelly Swemba, art by Fabiana Faiallo
Published by Beaming Books
First line: Violet was my best friend and an expert at spreading sunshine.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Read Kelly's revision process for this first line.
We Are Here
By Tami Charles, art by Bryan Collier
Published by Orchard Books
First line: The journey of who we are stretches beyond rivers, roads, mountains high-fiving blue skies.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and engages multiple senses
The Story of Ukraine
By Olena Kharchenko and Michael Sampson, art by Polina Doroshenko
Published by Brown Books Kids
Hook: sharing the positive attributes of Ukraine through its national anthem
First line: Ukraine is a beautiful country, with the Carpathian Mountains to the west, the sparkling Black Sea to the south, and the Dnipro River at its heart.
Elements used: sets the scene of the story and engages multiple senses
Lulu & Zoey
By Carrie Finison, art by Brittany Jackson
Published by RP Kids
First line: Sometimes Lulu wants to play.
Elements used: starts in the middle of the action, introduces a main character, and hints at a universal theme
No Snowball!
By Isabella Kung
Published by Orchard Books
First line: Oh, hello. You may have heard about me.
Elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
Books Aren't for Eating
By Carlie Sorosiak, art by Manu Montoya
Published by Walker Books
First line: Leopold collected two things that he loved very, very much: warm sweaters (with goats on them, of course) and … BOOKS!
Elements used: establishes an unusual premise and subverts the reader’s expectations
This Book Is My Best Friend
By Robin Robinson
Published by Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
First line: Excuse me…I’m sorry, but I NEED this book.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Raising Don
By Georgeanne Irvine
Published by San Diego Zoo Wildlife Alliance Press
Hook: the chronological life story of the baby tapir
First line: The wildlife care team at the San Diego Zoo thought for sure this was the day that Luna, a Baird’s tapir, would have her baby.
Elements used: sets the scene of the story and introduces an unusual main character
Darwin's Super-Pooping Worm Spectacular
By Polly Owen, art by Gwen Millward
Published by Wide Eyed Editions
Hook: Darwin’s discovery of the importance of worm poop
First line: Charles Darwin loved nature.
Elements used: introduces a well known person
My Red, White, and Blue
By Alana Tyson, art by London Ladd
Published by Philomel
First line: This is my flag; it represents me.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and establishes a unique premise
Mini Mighty Sweeps
By Lori Alexander, art by Jeff Harter
Published by Harper
First line: Sweeps is a lean green cleaning machine.
Elements used: introduces the main character and uses poetic devices
City Under the City
By Dan Yaccarino
Published by mineditionUS
First line: This is Bix.
Elements used: introduces an unusual main character
Star: The Bird Who Inspired Mozart
By Mireille Messier, art by Matte Stephens
Published by tundra
First line: The streets of Vienna were just waking up.
Elements used: establishes the setting of the story
Only the Trees Know
By Jane Whittingham, art by Cinyee Chiu
Published by Kids Can Press
First line: Winter in the Old Forest was cold, dark and very long.
Elements used: establishes the setting of the story and engages multiple senses
The Corgi and the Queen
By Caroline L. Perry, art by Lydia Corry
Published by GodwinBooks
Hook: tells about the life of Queen Elizabeth II through the lens of her relationship with her corgis.
First line: Elizabeth of York wasn’t a storybook princess.
Elements used: subverts the readers expectations, introduces the main character, and references something with universal appeal
Groundhog Gets It Wrong
By Jess Townes, art by Nicole Miles
Published by Dial Books for Young Readers
First line: Groundhog came from a long line of meterologists.
Elements used: introduces the main character and subverts the reader’s expectations
Just Like Grandma
By Kim Rogers, art by Julie Flett
Published by Heartdrum
First line: On the steps of a house at the end of the street, Becca watches Grandma bead and bead buckskin moccasins.
Elements used: starts in the middle of the action, establishes the setting of the story, hints at the universal theme of family and introduces the main characters
This Is Not My Home
By Eugenia Yah, art by Vivienne Chang
Published by Little, Brown and Company
First line: “I have some big news,” Lily’s mama said.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Logan's Greenhouse
By JaNay Brown-Wood, art by Samara Hardy
Published by Peachtree
First line: Logan has many plants in his greenhouse.
Elements used: introduces the main character and establishes an unusual setting
Becoming Blue
By Ellen Tarlow, art by Julien Chung
Published by Beach Lane Books
First line: Blue wanted to be Red.
Elements used: introduces an unusual main character, subverts the reader’s expectations and makes the reader wonder something
Namaste Is A Greeting
By Suma Subramaniam, art by Sandhya Prabhat
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: Namaste is a greeting.
Elements used: starts in the middle of the action and makes the reader wonder something
Pip's Book
By Guido Van Genechten
Published by Clavis
First line: Welcome! I’m so happy you’re here.
Elements used: engages the reader
Agatha May and the Angler Fish
By Nora Morrison and Jessie Ann Foley, art by Mika Song
Published by Dial Books for Young Readers
First line: One rainy morning in science room ten, Mrs. Marino cried: “Pick up your pens!”
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and makes the reader wonder something
The Three Hunters
By Raymond Gianfrancesco and the Grade Four Class of Leo Ussak School, art by Thamires Paredes
Published by Inhabit Media Inc
First line: A long time ago—before there were houses and trucks, before television and the Internet, before grocery stores and the post office—the windy coast of Hudson Bay was ice, water, and snow; tuktuit, caribou, and nattiit, seals.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and establishes an unusual setting
Bonnie's Rocket
By Emiline Lee, art by Alina Chau
Published by Lee & Low Books Inc.
First line: Bonnie was designing a magnificent rocket ship,...just like her father, hundreds of miles away.
Elements used: introduces the main character, makes the reader wonder something, and starts in the middle of the action
Lion Lights
By Richard Turere and Shelly Pollack, art by Sonia Possentini
Published by Tilbury House Publishers
Hook: follows a boy as he invents something to help his community
First line: What is that sound?
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Standing in the Need of Prayer
By Carole Boston Weatherford, art by Frank Morrison
Published by Crown Books for Young Readers
First line: It’s me, it’s me, O Lord, standing in the need of prayer.
Elements used: references a beloved classic
Farmhouse
By Sophie Blackall
Published by Little, Brown and Company
First page: Over a hill, at the end of a road, by a glittering stream that twists and turns, stands a house
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, engages multiple senses, and subverts the reader’s expectations
On This Airplane
By Lourdes Heuer, art by Sara Palacios
Published by tundra
First line: On this airplane, there is a pilot living her dream, one passenger daydreaming and another fast asleep.
Elements used: establishes an unusual setting and makes the reader wonder something
I Can Explain
By Shinsuke Yoshitake
Published by chronicle books
First line: I have a habit of picking my nose.
Elements used: introduces the main character’s problem and subverts the reader’s expectations
Berry Song
By Michaela Goade
Published by Little, Brown and Company
First line: On an island at the edge of a wide, wild sea, Grandma shows me how to live on the land.
Elements used: engages multiple senses and establishes the setting
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