January 2023
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I hope you find this collection of picture book first lines inspiring and motivational.
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Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*subverts the reader's expectations
*makes the reader laugh
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at the how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
*introduces the concept
*references something with universal appeal
*uses a play on words
When the Sky Glows
By Nell Cross Beckerman, art by David Litchfield
Published by Beach Lane Books
First line (over three spreads): Around the world, when morning comes…the sky glows.
elements used: sets the scene of the story and engages multiple senses
read Nell's revision process for this first line
CAVES
By Nell Cross Beckerman, art by Kalen Chock
Published by Orchard Books
First line: In the shade of the woods is a hill with a hole.
elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, engages multiple senses, and makes the reader wonder something
Angry Me
By Sandra V. Feder, art by Rahele Jomepour Bell
Published by Groundwood Books
First line: I get angry.
elements used: starts in the middle of the action and references a universal emotion
Tayra's Not Talking
By Lana Button, art by Christine Battuz
Published by Kids Can Press
First line: Hi! What’s your name?
elements used: engages the reader
All the Places We Call Home
By Patrice Gopo, art by Jenin Mohammed
Published by: Worthy Kids
First line: At night before I sleep, I twirl my globe.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and hints at the universal theme of bedtime
I'm So Glad You Were Born
By Ainsley Earhardt, art by Kim Barnes
Published by zonderkidz
First line: It’s time to celebrate wonderful you, and all the incredible things you can do.
elements used: engages the reader
Fridge-
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Opolis
By Melissa Coffey, art by Josh Cleland
Published by little bee books
First line: Past Microwave Meadows and Dishwasher Downs lay the infamous, polluted city of…FRIDGE-OPOLIS.
elements used: subverts the readers expectations
Bubbie & Rivka's Best-Ever Challah
By Sarah Lynne Reul
Published by Abrams Books for Young Readers
First line: The very first challah I ever made did not taste or look for good, but it definitely…felt so, so good to squish and smoosh and stretch and squeeze, then roll-pat into long snakes that Bubbie braided right up, like my hair before bedtime.
elements used: engages multiple senses
Giant Island
By Jane Yolen, art by Doug Keith
Published by Flashlight Press
First line: Giant Island sat low in the water as the boat approached.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
patchwork
By Matt De La Pena, art by Corinna Luyken
Published by putnam
First line: You were blue before you were even born.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and engages the reader
Poo-Dunit?
By Katelyn Aronson, art by Stephanie Laberis
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: Once upon a forest floor, a snout poked out a burrow door and wheezed and sneezed for on the breeze there came a hint of…POO.
elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, engages multiple senses, and subverts the reader's expectations
Granny and Bean
By Karen Reese, art by Charlotte Voake
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: Granny and Bean went walking one day in the sand, by the sea, with the sky all gray.
elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, sets the scene of the story, engages multiple senses, and references the universal appeal of the beach and family relationships
Good Night Little Bookstore
By Amy Cherrix, art by E.B. Goodale
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: Good night, little bookstore.
elements used: subverts the reader's expectations, introduces an unusual premise, and references a beloved classic
House Finds a Home
By Katy S. Duffield, art by Jen Corace
Published by Viking
First line: You might think houses don’t have hearts.
elements used: engages the reader, subverts the reader's expectations, introduces an unusual premise, and makes the reader wonder something
Music is a Rainbow
By Brian Collier
Published by LIttle, Brown and Co
First line: It was early morning, the only alone time the boy had with his father.
elements used: references the universal theme of family and makes the reader wonder something
Brand-New Bubbe
By Sarah Aronson, art by Ariel Landy
Published by Charlesbridge
First line: When Mom married Michael, Jillian got a really nice stepdad.
elements used:
The Fog Catcher's Daughter
By Marianne McShane, art by Alan Marks
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: There was a girl in Ireland.
elements used: sets the scene of the story
Mouse Calls
By Anne Marie Pace, art by Erin Kraan
Published by Beach Lane Books
First line: Mouse Calls Moose.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and subverts the reader's expectations
You Are Life
By Bao Phi, art by Hannah Li
Published by Capstone Editions
First line: You are life.
elements used: engages the reader
Supposing...
By Alastair Reid, art by JooHee Yoon
Published by Enchanted Lion Books
First line: Supposing I went begging instead of going to school and drew pictures and sang songs on a street corner and people gave me money and one day my father came home and said he was ruined and I told him not to worry and led him to my room and showed him my trunk full of pennies and he laughed and laughed…
elements used: subverts the reader's expectations
Buddy's New Buddy
By Christina Geist, art by Tim Bowers
Published by Random House
First line: Buddy wasn’t feeling great.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Lou
By Breanna Carzoo
Published by Harper
First line: Hello! Can you see me down here?
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and engages the reader
A Home Named Walter
By Chelea Lin Wallace, art by Ginnie Hsu
Published by Feiwel and Friends
First line: Walter was once a home.
elements used: introduces an unusual main character and makes the reader wonder something
Old Friends
By Margaret Aitken, art by Lenny Wen
Published by Faiwel and Friends
First line: Marjorie loved growing seeds into gardens, knitting cozy creations, and curling up in front of her favorite baking show.
elements used: introduces the main character
Our Story Starts In Africa
By Patrice Lwrence, art by JEnetta Gonzales
Published by Magic Cat Publishing
First line: Paloma is so excited.
elements used: introduces the reader and makes the reader wonder something
Beatrice Likes the Dark
By April Genevieve Tucholke, art by Khoa Le
Published by Algonquin Young Readers
First line: Beatrice likes the dark dark dark and the dark dark dark likes her.
elements used: introduces the main character, establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader, makes the reader wonder something, and subverts the reader's expectations
The Library Fish
By Alyssa Satin Capucilli, art by Gladys Jose
Published by Simon&Schuster Books for Young Readers
First line: Once there was a fish.
elements used: introduces the main character
Waiting for Mama
By Gianna Marino
Published by Viking
First line: Even though I can’t see, I know what’s happening outside.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
This is the Boat that Ben Built
By Jen Lynn Bailey, art by Maggie Zeng
Published by pajama press
First line: This is THE BOAT that BEN BUILT.
elements used: hints at a beloved classic
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