February 2023
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I hope you find this collection of picture book first lines inspiring and motivational.
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Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*subverts the reader's expectations
*makes the reader laugh
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
*introduces the concept
*references something with universal appeal
*uses a play on words
*makes the reader feel something
Mary Had A Little Plan
By Tammi Sauer, art by Vanessa Brantley-Newton
Published by union square kids
First line: Mary had a little plan that sprouted on the SPOT.
Elements used: hints at a beloved classic, establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, introduces the main character, makes the reader wonder something, and involves word play
read Tammi's revision process for this first line
A Grandma's Magic
By Charlotte Offsay, art by Asa Gilland
Published by Doubleday Books for Young Readers
First line (over two spreads): When a child is born…a grandma is born too.
Elements used: hints at the universal theme of family and references something with universal appeal (magic)
Impossible Moon
By Breanna J McDaniel, art by Tonya Engel
Published by Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
First line: When Grana was better, she told Mable the best stories.
Elements used: introduces the main characters and makes the reader wonder something
PIZZA! A Slice of History
By Greg Pizzoli
PublishAed by Viking
First line: This is pizza.
Elements used: references something universally loved
That's MY Sweater!
By Jessika von Innerebner
Published by Dial Books for Young Readers
First line: This is Olivia.
Elements used: introduces the main character
Zero Zebras: A Counting Book about What’s Not There
By Bruce Goldstone, art by Julien Chung
Published by Orchard Books
First line: I see one wallaby…and zero zebras.
Elements used: subverts the readers expectations
Way Past Afraid
By Hallee ADelman, art by Karen Wall
Published by Albert Whitman & Company
First line: We were almost at Grammy and Pops’s for our sleepover when the clouds got big and dark.
Elements used: hints at the universal theme of family, references something universally loved (sleepovers), and makes the reader feel something
Wake Me Up In 20 Coconuts!
By Laurie Keller
Published by Christy Ottaviano Books
First line: Who is Lady Jenny, 2C?
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Something Beautiful
By Lita Judge
Published by Atheneum Books for Young Readers
First line: Ball was Mouse’s favorite, and with it, he played alone.
Elements used: introduces the main character and starts in the middle of the action
The Talk
By Alicia D. Williams, art by Briana Mukodiri Uchendu
Published by Atheneum Books for Young Readers
First line: Hi, I’m Jay.
Elements used: introduces the main character
Year of the Cat
By Richard Ho, art by Jocelyn Li Langrand
Published by Greenwillow Books
First line: Rat felt guilty.
Elements used: introduces the main character, hints at their problem, and makes the reader wonder something
Where We Come From
By Sun Yung Shin, Shannon Gibney, John Coy, art by Dion MBD
Published by Carolrhoda Books
First line: We come from stardust, our bodies made of ancient elements.
Elements used: references a universal theme
Like
By Annie Barrows, art by Leo Espinosa
Published by chronicle books
First line: Hello. You are you, and I am I.
Elements used: engages the reader and hints at an unusual premise
A Synagogue Just Like Home
By Alice Blumenthal McGinty, art by Laurel Molk
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: Rabbi Ruben treasured his synagogue—from its cheery red bricks to its lively windows to the musty, dustry attic up on top.
Elements used: introduces the main character, engages multiple senses, and makes the reader wonder something
Night on the Sand
A Journey Toward Hope
A Journey Toward Hope
By Monica Mayper, art by Jaime Kim
Published by Clarion Books
First line: There was a howl, a dark whirl of wind and power.
Elements used: engages multiple senses and makes the reader feel something
Well Done, Mommy Penguin
By Chris Haughton
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: “Oh! Where is Mommy going?” says Little Penguin.
Elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
Build A House
By Rhiannon Giddens, art by Monica Mikai
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: You brought me here to build your house to build your house to build your house.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and references a beloved classic
The Best Kind of Mooncake
By Pearl AuYeung
Published by Page Street Kids
First line: Once upon a morning in Hong Kong, in the alley of Tai Yuen Street, my family was setting up for the day.
Elements used: sets the scene of the story and establishes a unique setting
Witch Hazel
By Molly Idle
Published by Little, Brown and Company
First line: In the spring, Hilda helped Hazel sweep the front porch.
Elements used: introduces the main characters and starts in the middle of the action
Annie Dreams of Biryani
By Namita Moolani Mehra, art by Chaaya Prabhat
Published by two lions
First line: In the heart of Iittle India sat an old cafe with an oldish owner and an even older secret.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Tiny Spoon VS Little FOrk
By Constance Lombardo, art by Dan & Jason
Published by Hippo Park
First line: Time for breakfast!!!
Elements used: references something with universal appeal
This Will Pass
By J. Donnini, art by Luke Scriven
Published by Bushel & Peck Books
First line: It was a special day for Crue, and he buzzed with excitement.
Elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something and feel something
Little Mole Goes to School
By Glenys Nellist, art by Sally Garland
Published by beaming books
First line: It was Little Mole’s first day of school.
Elements used: references a universal event and makes the reader feel something
The Bird Feeder
By Andrew Larsen, art by Dorothy Leung
Published by Kids Can Press
First line: Grandma’s been staying with us since she got sick.
Elements used: makes the reader feel something
Saving the Butterfly
By Helen Cooper, art by GIll Smith
Published by Candlewick Studio
First line: There were two of them left in the boat.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
You Wonder All The Time
By Deborah Farmer Kris, art by Jennifer Zivoin
Published by free spirit
First line: Who, what, when, where, why, and how?
Elements used: hints at the universal theme of curiosity
A Perfect Wonderful Day with Friends
By Philip Waechter
Published by Gecko Press
First line: This is Raccoon.
Elements used: introduces an unusual main character
I Cannot Draw a Horse
By Charise Mericle Harper
Published by union square kids
First line: This is my shape.
Elements used: hints at an unusual premise
Walter Had a Best Friend
By Deborah Underwood, art by Sergio Russier
Published by Beach Lane Books
First line: Walter had a best friend named Xavier
Elements used: references the universal theme of friendship and makes the reader wonder something
Peas in a Pod
By Rachel Noble, art by Katie Rewse
Published by amicus ink
First line: It’s just Daddy and me.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and feel something
Pig the Rebel
By Aaron Blabey
Published by Scholastic Press
First line: Pig was a pug and I’m sorry to say, after years of his antics it was now time to pay.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, introduces the main character and hints at his problem
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