April 2023
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I hope you find this collection of picture book first lines inspiring and motivational.
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Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*subverts the reader's expectations
*makes the reader laugh
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
*introduces the concept
*references something with universal appeal
*uses a play on words
*makes the reader feel something
The Three Canadian Pigs
By Jocelyn Watkinson, art by Marcus Cutler
Published by Sleeping Bear Press
First line: After their scrimmage, all smelly with sweat,
three pigs met a wolf as they packed up their net.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, uses poetic devices, sets the tone for the story, references a beloved classic, starts in the middle of the action, and subverts the reader's expectations
Read Jocelyn's revision process for this first line.
The Library Fish Learns to Read
By Alysa Satin Capucilli, art by Gladys Jose
Published by Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
First line: Library Fish loved her home on the desk of Mr. Hughes, the librarian.
Elements used: establishes the setting of the story and introduces a unique main character
How Many Squirrels Are in the World?
By Ben “Mister G” Gundersheimer, art by Marcos Almada Rivero
Published by Nancy Paulsen Books
First line: How many squirrels are in the world?
Elements used: engages the reader and subverts the reader's expectations
Find Your Brave: A Coco and Bear Story
By Apryl Stott
Published by Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
First line: Coco and Bear were friends from almost the first time they met.
Elements used: introduces the main characters and referencest the universal theme of friendship
Milo's Monster
By Tom Percival
Published by Bloomsbury
First line: Milo lived in a neat little house on a neat little street.
Elements used: introduces the main character and establishes the setting
When PB Met J
By Katelyn Aronson, art by Sarah Rebar
Published by Viking
First line: Once upon a kitchen, the fridges chilled on one side.
Elements used: establishes the setting and uses word play
A Gift of Feathers
By Ken Schept, art by Romina Galotta
Published by Feiwel and Friends
First line: Grandma Dot kept a small vase filled with feathers on a table by the front door.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Good Morning, Good Night
By Anita Lobel
Published by Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
First line: Good Morning!
Elements used: engages the reader
Platanos Go With Everything
By Lissette Norman, art by Sara Palacios
Published by Harper
First line: Platanos are like golden slices of this afternoon’s sun on our dinner plates.
Elements used: uses poetic devices and engages multiple senses
Gray Fox in the Moonlight
By Isaac Peterson
First line (over two spreads): Gray fox walks so lightly through the woods.
Elements used: introduces the main character, establishes the setting of the story, and engages multiple senses
Very Good Hats
By Emma Straub, art by Blanca Gomez
Published by Rocky Pond Books
First line: Do you know what a hat is?
Elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
Song in the City
By Daniel Bernstrom, art by Jenin Mohammed
Published by Harper
First line: Sunday morning, Emmalene heard a sing-along song, a busy city symphony that followed her along!
Elements used: introduces the main character and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
The Bears Shared
By Kim Norman, art by David Walker
Publisehd by Farrar Straus Giroux
First line: This is the lair the bears shared.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
THAT Flag
By Tameka Fryer Brown, art by Nikkolas Smith
Published by Harper
First line: Bianca and I are almost twins.
Elements used: subverts the reader's expectations and references something with universal appeal
Bunnies in a Boat
By Philip Ardagh, art by Ben Mantle
Published by Candlewick Press
First line: The penguins dive and paddle.
Elements used: incorporates poetic devices and engages multiple senses
I Can't Draw
By Stephen W. Martin, art by Brian Biggs
Published by Margaret K. McElderry Books
First line: My name is Max and I can’t draw!
Elements used: introduces the main character and his problem
Izmelda, the Fairest Dragon of Them All
By Joan Marr, art by Lala Watkins
Published by Union Square Kids
First line: Izmelda had never seen a real princess.
Elements used: introduces the main character and hints at her problem, and subverts the reader's expectations
A Boy and His Mirror
By Marchant Davis, art by Keturah A. Bobo
Published by Nancy Paulsen Books
First line: Once upon a time, there was a boy named Chris—who had this hair no one could miss.
Elements used: introduces the main character and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
All the Beating Hearts
By julie fogliano, art by catia chien
Published by Neal Porter Books
First line: each day starts with the sun and hopefully something to eat
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Oona in the Arctic
By Kelly DiPucchio, art by Raissa Figueroa
Published by Katherine Tegen Books
First line: Oona loved surprises
Elements used: introduces the main character
We Are ALLIES!
By Taimani Emerald
Published by Feiwel and Friends
First line: Even when we don’t realize it, news is spreading everywhere.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Abuela's Super Capa
By Ana Siqueira, art by Elisa Chavarri
Published by Harper
First line: Saturdays are superheroe days for Abuela and me.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
You Come from GREATNESS
By Sara Chinakwe, art by Ken Daley
Published by Waterbrook
First line: You came bustling into the world, a mighty bundle of energy, ready to do great things.
Elements used: engages the reader
A Flag for Juneteenth
By Kim Taylor
Published by Neal Porter Books
First line: The scent of nutmeg and vanilla floated through our cabin…and landed as a smile on my face.
Elements used: engages multiple senses
Leprechaun vs, Easter Bunny
By Todd Tarpley, art by Stephanie Laberis
Published by Little, Brown and Company
First line: High on the hill where the clover is green, and rainbows are brighter than you’ve ever seen…a wee little leprechaun popped up his head.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and introduces the main character
Sleepy Sheepy
By Lucy Ruth Cummins, art by Pete Oswald
Published by Flamingo Books
First line: Sleepy Sheepy…was NOT SLEEPY!
Elements used: hints at the universal theme of bedtime
Nell Plants a Tree
By Anne Wynter, art by Daniel Miyares
Published by Balzer + Bray
First line (over three spreads): Before a grip on a branch and a fall to the ground and a scrape and a leap and a reach for the top, before anyone finds out how high they can climb, Nell picks up a seed.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, introduces the main character, and subverts the reader's expectations
This Little Kitty
By Karen Obuhanych
Published by Alfred A Knopf
First line: This little kitty starts the day and meows “Wake up! It’s time to play!”
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
Something Wild
By Molly Ruttan
Published by Nancy Paulsen Books
First line: Ever since she was small, Hannah loved to play her violin.
Elements used: introduces the main character
Pirate Passover
By Judy Press, art by AManda Gulliver
Published by Kar-Ben
First line: This is the story of a pirate named Drew who sailed the high seas with a jolly good crew.
Elements used: estalishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and establishes the setting of the story
Wallflowers
By Mackenzie Joy
Published by Clarion Books
First line: People call you a wallflower.
Elements used: engages the reader
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