March 2022
Every month, I check out 30 recently published picture books and share their first lines (or hooks, for NF).
Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something          Â
*sets the tone for the story                      Â
*starts in the middle of the action               Â
*hints at a universal theme                                            Â
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at the how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
Ear Worm
by Jo Knowles, art by Galia Bernstein
2022
First line: One summer day, Little Worm went out to play and discovered he had a song stuck in his head.
elements used: introduces the main character and their problem, establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story, and makes the reader wonder something
Just Help!
by Sonia Sotomayor, art by Angela Dominguez
2022
First line: Each day when Sonia woke up, her mother asked her a question.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
Oceans of Love
by Janet Lawler
2022
First line: Imagine moms beneath the waves with lots of love to share.
elements used: engages the reader and hints at an unusual premise
I Love You Because I Love You
by Muon Thi Van, art by Jessica Love
2022
First line: I love you because...because you're you.
elements used: hints at a universal theme
ANZU the great KAIJU
by Benson Shum
2022
First line: All great kaiju are born with a superpower to strike fear in the heart of their given city.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and hints at an unusual premise
MINA
by Matthew Forsythe
2022
First line: Mina lived in her own little world where nothing ever bothered her.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
I Am Golden
by Eva Chen, art by Sophie Diao
2022
First line: We named you Mei.
elements used: introduces the main character and hints at the universal theme of the importance of a nameÂ
The Year We Learned To Fly
by Jacqueline Woodson, art by Rafael Lopez
2022
First line: That was the year we learned to fly...that was the spring when the rain seemed like it would never stop and the thunder boomed so hard, we weren't allowed to go outside.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
I Wish Wish Wish for you
by Sandra Magsamen, art by Melisa Fernandez Nitsche
2022
First line: I believe that wishes really do come true, so here's what I wish, wish, wish for you.
elements used: hints at a universal theme, engages the reader, and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
Marley and the Family Band
by Cedella Marley and Tracey Baptiste, art by Tiffany Rose
2022
First line:Tonight was Marley's big night!Â
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
You Are Not Alone
by Alphabet Rockers, art by Ashley Evans
2022
First line: Are you ready to go?
elements used: Engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
Out of a Jar
by Deborah Marcero
2022
First line: Llewellyn loved scary books, scary jokes, and scary cartoons.
elements used: introduces the main character
Eyes that Speak to the Stars
by Joanna Ho, art by Dung Ho
2022
First line: The other day, when Baba picked me up from school, I didn't run in for a hug the way I usually do; I stared at my toes where it was safe.
elements used: Introduces the main character and hints at their problem, and makes the reader wonder something
Big Ship Rescue
by Chris Gall
2022
First line: A ship is in trouble!
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Where Is Bina Bear?
by Mike Curato
2022
First line: Tiny was having a big party.
elements used: introduces an unusual character and sets the scene of the story
How High Is Heaven?
by Linsey Davis
2022
First line: How do I get to heaven?
elements used: engages the reader and hints at a universal theme
SMOOCH!
by Karen Kilpatrick, art by German Blanco
2022
First two lines: SMOOCH! A Kiss!
elements used: hints at the universal theme of love and engages multiple senses
POWWOW DAY
by Tracy Sorell, art by Madelyn Goodnight
2022
First line: "River, wake up," Amber whispers.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
The Hiking Viking
by Laura Gehl, art by Timothy Banks
2022
First line: From the moment he was born, Leif was different.
elements used: introduces the main character and hints at his problem, makes the reader wonder something, and hints at a universal theme
Apple and Magnolia
by Laura Gehl, art by Patricia Metola
2022
First line: Britta's two favorite trees, Apple and Magnolia, were best friends.
elements used: introduces unusual main characters
First Notes of Spring
by Jessica Kulekjian, art by Jennifer Bower
2022
First line: Every year, after many months of cold and snow, the First Notes of Spring musicians melted winter away with their melodies.
elements used: introduces unusual main characters, sets the scene of the stories, and engages multiple senses
Love Grows Everywhere
by Barry Timms, art by Tisha Lee
2022
First line: Love grows everywhere...from country farm to city square.
elements used: hints at a universal theme and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
Not Enough Lollipops!
by Megan Maynor, art by Micah Player
2022
First line: The final prize in the school raffle was a basket of lollipops so big, the principal pulled it onstage in a wagon.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and hints at the universal theme of wanting to win something
Somewhere
by Robie H. Harris, art by Armando Marino
2022
First line: Somewhere, somewhere is where I wanted to go.
elements used: hints at a universal theme and makes the reader wonder something
Love in the Library
by Maggie Tokuda-Hall, art by Yas Imamura
2022
First line: Tama did not like the desert.
elements used: introduces the main character and hints at their problem, and makes the reader wonder something
I'm Growing Great
by Mechal Renee Roe
2022
First lines: Lovely and wise, shine at sunrise! i am growing each day!
elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and engages multiple senses
Little Wonder
by Claire Keane
2022
First line: Good morning, Little Wonder!
elements used: Â introduces an unusual main character
Tia Fortuna's New Home
by Ruth Behar, art by Devon Holzwarth
2022
First line: I love to visit my tia Fortuna in her little pink casita at the Seaway.
elements used: introduces the main character, sets the scene for the story, and makes the reader wonder something
Can Sophie Change the World?
by Nancy Elizabeth Wallace, art by Aura Lewis
2022
First line: It was a normal Sunday afternoon except for one thing.
elements used: sets the scene for the story and makes the reader wonder something
Amah Faraway
by Margaret Chiu Greanias, art by Tracy Subisak
2022
First line: It was time for a visit.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
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