February 2022
Every month, I check out 30 recently published picture books and share their first lines (or hooks, for NF).
Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at the how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
Let Liberty Rise
by Chana Stiefel, art by Chuck Groenink
2021
Hook: the story of young and old Americans financing the completion of Lady Liberty's platform with their pocket money.
!VAMOS! Let's Cross the Bridge
by Raul the Third, art by Elaine Bay
2021
First line: Little Lobo has a brand-new truck!
elements used: makes the reader wonder something (what will the MC do with his truck?)
Just Be Jelly
by maddie frost
2021
First line: We have 19,000 rules in the sardine safety handbook.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and sets the tone for the story. What are the rules and why do they have so many?
Do You Speak Fish?
by DJ Corchin, art by Dan Dougherty
2021
First line: A boy ran into a fish.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something, starts in the middle of the action, and hints at an unusual premise. Why was this boy engaging this fish?
There's a Unicorn
IN YOUR BOOK
IN YOUR BOOK
by Tom Fletcher, art by Greg Abbott
2021
First two lines: GALLOPING GLITTER! There's a UNICORN in your book!
elements used: engages the reader, makes the reader wonder something, and hints at an unusual premise (this won't be your usual unicorn story)
Wutaryoo
by Nilah Magruder
2022
First line: She was called Wutaryoo, and she lived there, in that shallow hole in the earth.
elements used: introduces an unusual character and makes the reader wonder something (why was she called that?)
Baby, Sleepy Baby
by Atinuke, art by Angela Brooksbank
2021
First line: Baby, sweet baby, I'll call on the winds, and you'll sail like a ship through the sky.
elements used: engages the reader, sets the tone for the story (poetic), hints at a universal theme (parental love), establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story, and hints at a beloved classic (Winken, Blinken, and Nod)
Little Bee's Flower
by Jacob Souva
2021
First line: On the first day of Spring, Queen Bee declared that it was time to find flowers for the great nectar and pollen harvest.
elements used: sets the scene of the story
Thank you, Neighbor!
by Ruth Can
2021
First line: Every day, we go for a walk.
elements used: hints at a universal theme
The Children's Moon
by Carmen Agra Deedy, art by Jim La Marche
2021
First line: There once was a time when the sun alone ruled the day, the moon graced the night, and little children were put firmly to bed before sunset.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something (what happened to change that) and sets the tone of the story (has a folktale quality)
Bubbie's Magical Hair
by Abbe Rolnick, art by Lynda Porter
2021
First line: When the warm wind rustles with a hint of laughter Bubbie glides in with her magical hair.
elements used: introduces an unusual character, sets the tone of the story (magical realism), establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, engages multiple senses (touch, sound, sight)
My Two Border Towns
by David Bowles, art by Erika Meza
2021
First line: Every other Saturday, my dad wakes me up early.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something (why are they getting up early?)
A House
by Kevin Henkes
2021
First line: A house.
elements used: engages the reader (through stating the obvious) and hints at a universal theme
THAO
by Thao Lam
2021
First line: It's not easy being Thao.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something, establishes the main character, and hints at their problem
Jazz for Lunch!
by Jarrett Dapier, art by Eugenia Mello
2021
First line: Struttin' with my Auntie Nina down to a CLUB.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something, establishes the main character, and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
What Do You Know?
by Aracelis Girmay, art by Ariana Fields
2021
First line: When loves comes to the well and asks, what do you know, it says, I know thirst, I know abundance.
elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in and establishes an unusual premise (the abstract "love" asking questions)
Hamsters Make Terrible Roommates
by Cheryl B. Klein, art by Abhi Alwar
2022
First line: I'm Henry.
elements used: establishes the main character
The McClure Twins Make It Fashion
by Ava and Alexis McClure, art by Courtney Dawson
2021
First line: Ava and Alexis are sisters.
elements used: establishes the main characters and hints at the universal theme of family
CHAMELEON
CAN BE
CAN BE
by Carolina Farias
2021
First line: In a forest filled with trees, nestled between twigs and leaves, a beautiful flower grew in a bright yellow hue!
elements used: sets the scene of the story and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
Hugo Sprouts and the Strange Case of the Beans
by John Loren
2021
First line: I bet you've heard stories, or read the adventures of wily young whiz kids, or expert inventors....
elements used: engages the reader and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
AWAKE
by Mags DeRoma
2021
First line: In a big, big city, on a busy city street, there is a pretty tall building.
elements used: sets the scene of the story
Friends are Friends,
FOREVER
FOREVER
by Dane Liu, art by Lynn Scurfield
2021
First line: In our town, the winter howls.
elements used: sets the scene of the story and engages multiple senses
Our Table
by Peter H. Reynolds
2021
First line: Violet fondly remembered the table.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something (what happened to the table?)
I want to...
by Hongbo Gao, art by Sixin Cheng
2021
First line: I want to s t r e t c h my hand to the tip of the tree branch.
elements used: establishes the main character and sets the tone for the story (poetic and magical)
Milk and Juice
a Recycling Romance
a Recycling Romance
by Meredith Crandall Brown
2021
First line: Once upon a time, in a refrigerator not too far away, a jug of milk and a bottle of juice fell in love.
elements used: establishes unusual main characters, hints at the universal theme of love, and hints at a beloved classic
Hair Story
by NoNieqa Ramos, art by Keisha Morris
2021
First line: Baby's crown, lush, wild, beautiful brown: Puerto Rican Princesa perfect lips, belleza.
elements used: sets the tone of story (poetic) and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
WHEN I WAKE UP
by Seth Fishman, art by Jessixa Bagley
2021
First line: The sky is dark when I wake.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something (why is the sky dark? Is it still night?)
Pig the Monster
by Aaron Blabey
2021
First line: Pig was a pug, and I'm sorry to say on Halloween night he'd get carried away...
elements used: introduces the main character, makes the reader wonder something (how did Pig get carried away?), and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
Off-LIMITS
by Heen Yoon
2021
First line: Hello! I'm just looking.
elements used: introduces the main character and hints at the universal theme of curiosity.
SHEEPISH
(wolf under cover)
(wolf under cover)
by Helen Yoon
2021
First line: Success! I'm in!
elements used: introduces the main character (a wolf dressed as a sheep), engages the reader (invites the reader to find the wolf in disguise on the page), and makes the reader wonder something (what is the wolf planning to do?)