July 2022
Every month, I check out 30 recently published picture books and share their first lines (and hooks, for NF).
Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at the how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
*introduces the concept
All books in this collection were published in 2022.
Holi Hai!
By Chitra Soundar, art by Darshika Varma
First line: The moon was round and almost full.
Elements used: uses the universal theme of nature.
The Path
By Bob Staake
First line: You will walk.
Elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
Brian the Dancing Lion
By Tom Tinn-Disbury
First line: Brian LOVED to dance.
Elements used: establishes a unique premise
Not a CAT: a memoir
By Winter Miller, art by Danica Novgorodoff
First line: Hi. My name is Gato.
Elements used: introduces the main character and hints at the tone of the story
In the Clouds
By Elly MacKay
First line: Hello, little friend!
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
ALONE LIKE ME
By Rebecca Evans
First line: I used to go to school in the mountains of China, where I was born, but since we moved, my desk there is empty.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Joy Ride
By Sherri Duskey Rinker, art by Ana Ramirez Gonzalez
First line: It’s the third day of summer vacation, and I’ve already tie-dyed two shirts, fancied up a boring old hat, and made a new outfit for Max.
Elements used: Hints at the universal theme of summer boredom
I AM QUIET
By Andie Powers, art by Betsy Peterson
First line: My name is Emile.
Elements used: introduces the main character
Clean Green Machines
By Tony Mitton, art by Ant Parker
Hook: Rabbit, Bird, and Mouse explore energy saving machines
First line: These are solar panels.
Elements used: introduces the concept
Listen
By Shannon Stocker, art by Devon Holzwarth
Hook: life story spotlighting her love for music and how her loss of hearing guided her musical journey.
First line: This is a story of music.
Elements used: introduces the topic
SOME DADDIES
By Carol Gordon Ekster, art by Javiera Mac-lean Alvarez
First line: Every daddy is different.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and engages the reader with a universal term of affection for a parent
Growing an Artist
By John Parra
First line: “Are you ready, mijo?” Papi asks.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Me and Ms. Too
By Laura Ruby, art by Dung Ho
First line: When Dad married Ms. Too, everything changed.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and introduces a unique premise
Breaking Through the Clouds
By Sandra Nickel, art by Helena Perez Garcia
Hook: story of her career, starting with an explanation of how her interest in clouds was sparked
First line: By the time Joanne was five, she had discovered her mother didn’t much care where she was.
Elements used: introduces the main character and their problem
Chirp!
By Mary Murphy
First line: It has been a quiet night.
Elements used: make the reader wonder something
BLUE BADGER
By Huw Lewis Jones, art by Ben Sanders
First line: White and black.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and uses the universal appeal of colors and opposites
Patience, Patches!
By Christy Mihaly, art by Sheryl Murray
First line: When the sun peeks through the window and it’s time to wake up, I am ready.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something and uses the universal theme of a new day
Home is Where the Birds Sing
By Cynthia Rylant, art by Katie Harnett
First line: Home is where you come in from the rain.
Elements used: introduces the universal theme of home
Firsts & Lasts
By Leda Schubert, art by CLover Robin
First line (over three spreads): Spring is…the last time we hear “Snow day!” on the news, the last time we see the plow truck roar down the road, the last time we bundle into snowsuits, and the last time we can play in our snow fort.
Elements used: introduces the universal theme of changing seasons and the universal appeal of familiar activities
I'll Go and Come Back
By Rajani LaRocca, art by Sara Palacios
First line: For the first time since I was a baby, I flew across the world to see aunties and uncles, cousin-brothers and cousin-sisters, and Sita Pati.
Elements used: uses the universal appeal of family and the excitement of seeing family that live far away
The Pout Pout Fish and the
Worry Worry Whale
by Deborah Deisen, art by Dan Hanna
First line: Mr. Fish was quite excited.
Elements used: establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in, introduces the main character, and makes the reader wonder something
HOME
By Tonya Lippert, art by Andrew Stegmaier
First line: When they were little…Clare and Wes had the Brown House.
Elements used: introduces the main characters and hints at the universal theme of change
Would You Come Too?
By Liz Garton Scanlon, art by Diana Sudyka
First line: If we were walls, we’d have windows, and we’d throw them open wide.
Elements used: introduces an unusual premise
Pineapple Princess
By Sabina Hahn
First line: I am deeply, deeply misunderstood.
Elements used: introduces the main character's problem and hints at a universal feeling
Little Houses
By Kevin Henkes, art by Laura Dronzek
First line: When I visit my grandparents at the beach, we stay in a little house.
Elements used: hints at the universal theme of routine and the universal appeal of visiting grandparents
The Problem with Pajamas
By Lauren Stohler
First line: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. AhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhHA!
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something.
I Am Able to SHINE
By Korey Watari, art by Mike Wu
First line: Keiko has a spirited soul and a head full of ideas.
Elements used: introduces the main character
This Book Will Get You To Sleep!
By Jory John, art by Olivier Tallec
First line: Attention, reader.
Elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
Bailey & Blanket
By Emily House
First line: Bailey and Blanket were the best of friends from the moment they first found each other.
Elements used: introduces an unusual friend duo.
Giant Giant
By Dylan Hewitt
First line: Just over here was a peaceful little place.
Elements used: makes the reader wonder something
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