April 2022
Every month, I check out 30 recently published picture books and share their first lines (and hooks, for NF).
Elements of a great first line
*makes the reader wonder something
*sets the tone for the story
*starts in the middle of the action
*hints at a universal theme
*establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
*introduces the main character and their problem
(bonus points if the character is particularly unusual)
*sets the scene of the story
*hints at the how the story will end
*engages the reader
*engages multiple senses
*references a beloved classic
*hints at an unusual premise
A Family Is...
by Lisa Thiesing
2022
First line: A family is…for having breakfast and for getting dressed.
elements used: hints at the universal themes of family and routines
Letters to Live by: An Alphabet with Intention
by Lisa Frenkel Riddiough, art by Asa Gilland
2022
Hook: An ABC book—each letter suggests an action to make the most of every day
First line: Appreciate Art
elements used: engages the reader and establishes a poetic tone
How to Dress a Dinosaur
by Robin Currie, art by Alycia Pace
2022
First line: ROAR! Oh, No, you turned into a dinosaur!
elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
NIGHT becomes DAY:
Changes in Nature
Changes in Nature
by Cynthia Argentine
2021
Hook: the transitions of natures using opposites and cycles
First line: Night becomes day.
elements used: hints at the universal theme of nature and a poetic tone
Chicken Frank, DINOSAUR!
by Shaunda Wenger, art by JoJo Ensslin
2021
First line: Addie the hen: “What’s that?”
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
A True Wonder: The Comic Book Hero Who Changed Everything
by Kirsten W Larson, art by Katy Wu
2021
Hook: the chronological story of how Wonder Woman was created and how current events shaped her various iterations.
First line: “As lovely as Aphrodite—as wise as Athena—with the speed of Mercury and the strength of Hercules—she is known only as Wonder Woman, but who she is, or whence she came, nobody knows!”
elements used: references a beloved classic
Goodnight
Ganesha
Ganesha
by Nadia Salomon, art by Poonam Mistry
2021
First line: There, by the window, beams warmth in a frame.
elements used: engages the reader, engages multiple senses, and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
A SEAT at the TABLE
The Nancy Pelosi Story
The Nancy Pelosi Story
by Elisa Boxer, art by Laura Freeman
2021
Hook: the chronological life story of Nancy Pelosi, showing how she followed in both her mother’s footsteps through behind-the-scenes work and her mayor father’s footsteps when she finally ran for Congress.
First line: The mayor’s daughter watched out the window as families lined up at the door, looking for help.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something
Circle Under Berry
by Carter Higgins
2021
First line: circle under berry
elements used: engages the reader and introduces the concept
The Secret Code Inside You
all about your DNA
all about your DNA
by Rajani LaRocca, art by Steven Salerno
2021
Hook: rhyming exploration of what DNA is—and where it stops in defining you
First line: Why aren’t you fuzzy like a dog, or buzzy like a bee?
elements used: engages the reader, makes the reader wonder something, engages multiple senses, and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader in
WATER
A Deep Dive of Discovery
A Deep Dive of Discovery
by Christy Mihaly, art by Mariona Cabassa
2021
Hook: a chapter picture book covering ways water brings life to our planet and including stories about water from cultures around the world.
First lines: Plip! Plop! Plitter! Plosh! Raindrops fall from the clouds onto rooftops and umbrellas, cars and gardens. What happens to the rain? Where does the water go?
elements used: engages multiple senses, engages the reader, and establishes the theme and the tone of the story
The LONGEST
LETSGOBOY
LETSGOBOY
by Derick wilder, art by Catia Chien
2021
First line: Mewmew wakes me, rumbledrumming my tummy.
elements used: introduces a unique main character and engages multiple senses
Dear Mr. Dickens
by Nancy Churnin, art by Bethany Stancliffe
2021
Hook: slice-of-life story about a Jewish woman who wrote to Charles Dickens to complain about his portrayal of Jews in Oliver Twist—and his response.
First line: Think of someone famous you admire.
elements used: engages the reader
A Queen to the Rescue
by Nancy Churnin, art by Yevgenia Nayberg
2021
Hook: spotlights the moments in Henrietta’s life when she helped others, leading up to when she founded Hadassah, a charity to help feed hungry and sick people in Palestine, and the work she did through her charity to help children during WWII.
First line: From the time Henrietta was little, she loved hearing about the woman who risked her life to save others.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
A Dinosaur Named RUTH
by Julia Lyon, art by Alexandra Bye
2021
Hook: chronological story of Ruth Mason’s lifelong struggle to share with the world the dinosaur fossils she found in her own backyard, beginning with her childhood discovery of the first one
First line: Ruth Mason was forever curious about her own backyard.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
Hammock for Two
by Shoshana Stopek, art by Gal Weizman
2022
First line: Sid was looking forward to a nice long nap in his new hammock.
elements used: introduces the main character and hints at the universal themes of rest and wanting to use something newly acquired
Heads UP!
by Shoshana Stopek, art by Gal Weizman
2022
First line: Peanut was a little guy with BIG ideas and an even BIGGER imagination.
elements used: introduces the main character, makes the reader wonder something, and juxtaposes contrasting ideas
Out of Control Rhino
by Shoshana Stopek, art by Roman Diaz
2022
First line: Summer vacation was in full swing, and Roxy was excited to show off her new bathing suit.
elements used: introduces the main character, makes the reader wonder something, and establishes the setting of the story
Sometimes
Cows Wear Polka Dots
Cows Wear Polka Dots
by Shoshana Stopek, art by Roman Diaz
2022
First line: Millie was a very unique cow.
elements used: introduces the main character, hints at her problem, and makes the reader wonder something.
Dancing with Daddy
by Anitra Rowe Shulte, art by Ziyue Chen
2021
First line: Elsie looked back and forth between two beautiful dresses.
elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
A Vote for Susanna
The First Woman Mayor
The First Woman Mayor
by Karen M. Greenwald, art by Sian James
2021
Hook: A grandmother enlists her grandson’s help in baking her special birthday cake, and when the boy expresses worry that baking is a girl’s job, she is inspired to tell him the story of the first woman mayor
First line: Dora made her grandson an extraordinary promise.
Elements used: introduces the main character and makes the reader wonder something
The Wall and the Wild
by Chrstina Dendy, art by Katie Rewse
2021
First line: At the end of Ironbark Way, the town of Stone Hollow edges against the WILD.
elements used: establishes the setting and makes the reader wonder something
BLOB
by Anne Appert
2021
First lines: This is B(l)ob.
Blob: Hi! Actually, it’s Blob. With an “L”.
elements used: introduces an unusual character and hints at that character’s problem
Maya's Treasure
by Laurie Smollett Kutscera
2021
First line: Maya and Alita lived by the sea,
where the tide rippled silver,
and the ocean floor offered its treasures
by the light of the waning moon.
elements used: introduces the main character, establishes the setting of the story, and establishes a rhythm that pulls the reader into the story
Bye, Car
by Naomi Danis, art by Daniel Rieley
2021
First line: Bye, car.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and hints at a universal interest
Tu YouYou's Discovery
Finding a Cure for Malaria
Finding a Cure for Malaria
by Songju Ma Daemicke, art by Lin
2021
Hook: sharesTu YouYou’s role in finding a cure for Malaria, beginning with her own illness as a child that jumpstarted her interest in the science of cures.
First line: In 1969, people all across the world were sick.
elements used: makes the reader wonder something and establishes the time period of the story
WHO is a Scientist?
by Laura Gehl
2021
Hook: a series of mini profiles highlighting areas of expertise within science
First line: Who is a scientist?
elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
BRAINS!
Not Just A Zombie Snack
Not Just A Zombie Snack
by Stacy McAnulty, art by Matthew Rivera
2021
First lines: Don’t worry. I’m not going to eat your brain.
elements used: engages the reader and makes the reader wonder something
I Don't Like Birthday Parties
by Maureen Gaspari, art by Siski Kalla
2021
First line: Lucas was a boy who did not like birthday parties.
elements used: introduces the main character, establishes an unusual problem, and makes the reader wonder something
Dinner on DOMINGOS
by Alexandra Katona, art by Claudia Navarro
2021
First line: Every Sunday, I head to abuelita’s casa for dinner with mi familia.
elements used: hints at the universal theme of tradition and family
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